AColecovision's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My little practice FLA]

Not Bad, but.....

You need to learn how to implement sound, and maybe some color. The animation is smooth enough, so you have that going for you. Just take a little more time with it and it may turn into something really good.

Shock4th responds:

Yes, i know i should add sound and color but this is just a little practice. i'm just trying, how do i say it, to get use to frame by frame. Get to know things work.

Besides, i still have to learn how to mess around with sound and make it mix well with my animations.

[Mecha world]

Not what I was expecting.....

I wish I could give this a better score, but the whole movie was waaaay too inconsistent. The framerate dropped in places, The animation was choppy in spots, The sound was all over the place, I couldn't follow the story at all, and although the drawings were good in places, I found most of the scenery to be too bland. I found myself having more fun trying to name what games/artists the soundtrack came from than I did watching the movie. I did like the 8/16-bit soundtracks though. The voice acting/recording left a lot to be desired, but the female characters performed better than the main character. All in all, I wish more time was put into this.

pwnt2j responds:

I'll redo all the voices later and I was planning on redoing all the artwork and animation later, thanks for the critique